novelette
so i've printed my 'novelette' albeit unfinished. to my surprise, it reached 50 pages!! i never thought it would. i knew, though i denied, that it would pass 20 measly pages.
could you believe that?? 50 pages, and still unfinished. there were parts that i hated and parts i so ever loved. i felt pissed when i was rechecking/reediting it kanina. i ultimately hate it when:
1. i overuse a word.
2. when i cant find the best word to suit what i want to express.
3. when it lacks poetry.
4. when it's too cheezy and giddy.
5. the fact that my vocabulary inventory often stuff unused words in the back and i forget to use it when best ought to.
6. when i confuse the word 'their' to 'there'.
7. when i have to create my own words like 'consciencesual'. why can't they just simply exist??
8. using parethesis
9. reading them outloud and having the syllables jumble themselves up
10. cliche`s.
posted by the irresistably conceited Jenni |
